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PostSubject: Venom   November 27th 2013, 6:46 pm

Name: Venom
Gender: male
Strength: anything violent, including good senses and defense
Weakness: cant stay still for any amount of time and doesn't think before acting at all.
Pelt color: pure black
Markings: scars on back, legs, head, one eye covered by scar
Eye color: Fiery red/orange/yellow
Personality: hates everything
Other: yet his eye is covered by scar, he can still see better than most wolves. He killed his first mate with no mercy, just to become alpha of his pack again. he never regretted it.
Human or wolf: wolf


I don't know what to do, what to choose. What can I do? What can I choose? The only way to avoid the choice is to run, so I will run. But, isn't that a choice?


Last edited by edme123 on December 1st 2013, 2:11 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : correcting weakness.)
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PostSubject: Re: Venom   December 1st 2013, 2:07 pm

Sorry, but you're going to need to add something more to his weaknesses than just "anything kind". It should include something physical.
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PostSubject: Re: Venom   December 1st 2013, 2:23 pm

edme123 wrote:
Name: Venom
Gender: male
Strength: anything violent, including good senses and defense
Weakness: cant stay still for any amount of time and doesn't think before acting at all.
Pelt color: pure black
Markings: scars on back, legs, head, one eye covered by scar
Eye color: Fiery red/orange/yellow
Personality: hates everything
Other: yet his eye is covered by scar, he can still see better than most wolves. He killed his first mate with no mercy, just to become alpha of his pack again. he never regretted it.
Human or wolf: wolf
( is this better?)


I don't know what to do, what to choose. What can I do? What can I choose? The only way to avoid the choice is to run, so I will run. But, isn't that a choice?
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PostSubject: Re: Venom   December 4th 2013, 1:41 pm

Yes, thank you. Accepted.
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