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edme123
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edme123


Scorceress

Posts : 1599
Female Age : 22
Location : Htrae
Registered : 2012-09-22


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PostSubject: Venom   Venom Icon_minitimeNovember 27th 2013, 6:46 pm

Name: Venom
Gender: male
Strength: anything violent, including good senses and defense
Weakness: cant stay still for any amount of time and doesn't think before acting at all.
Pelt color: pure black
Markings: scars on back, legs, head, one eye covered by scar
Eye color: Fiery red/orange/yellow
Personality: hates everything
Other: yet his eye is covered by scar, he can still see better than most wolves. He killed his first mate with no mercy, just to become alpha of his pack again. he never regretted it.
Human or wolf: wolf


Last edited by edme123 on December 1st 2013, 2:11 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : correcting weakness.)
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WildWind
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WildWind


— forest wanderer —

Posts : 611
Female Age : 27
Location : Kansas
Registered : 2008-05-09


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PostSubject: Re: Venom   Venom Icon_minitimeDecember 1st 2013, 2:07 pm

Sorry, but you're going to need to add something more to his weaknesses than just "anything kind". It should include something physical.
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edme123
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edme123


Scorceress

Posts : 1599
Female Age : 22
Location : Htrae
Registered : 2012-09-22


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PostSubject: Re: Venom   Venom Icon_minitimeDecember 1st 2013, 2:23 pm

edme123 wrote:
Name: Venom
Gender: male
Strength: anything violent, including good senses and defense
Weakness: cant stay still for any amount of time and doesn't think before acting at all.
Pelt color: pure black
Markings: scars on back, legs, head, one eye covered by scar
Eye color: Fiery red/orange/yellow
Personality: hates everything
Other: yet his eye is covered by scar, he can still see better than most wolves. He killed his first mate with no mercy, just to become alpha of his pack again. he never regretted it.
Human or wolf: wolf
( is this better?)
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WildWind
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WildWind


— forest wanderer —

Posts : 611
Female Age : 27
Location : Kansas
Registered : 2008-05-09


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PostSubject: Re: Venom   Venom Icon_minitimeDecember 4th 2013, 1:41 pm

Yes, thank you. Accepted.
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