Faolan1, your character needs to have both strengths and weaknesses. E.g., she is a good swimmer but cannot run very fast. Her personality can't really be just "hunting", either. Is she nice, or mean? Is she adventurous, or timid? Just think on that.
And please remember that you shouldn't use first-person role playing (Using words such as I, my, me, we, us... etc. unless the character is speaking). It gets confusing as to what character you are playing if you have more than one (so, instead, use she, her, they, them... etc.).