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faolan1
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Female Registered : 2012-12-04


PostSubject: Faolan   December 6th 2012, 5:30 pm

Name:faolan

Gender:female

Strength: running very fast and swimming

Weakness:metting new pack memmbers

Pelt Color:silveish gray

Markings:strange spirole on left paw pad

Eye color:green

Personality: halarious

Other:my real mother had to abandon me on a river that was going to crack and it did i got rescued by a bear whos cub just died she raised me to be a bear and now im trying to learn the ways of the wolf so far at a good start

Human or Wolf:wolf


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WildWind
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Female Age : 21
Location : Kansas
Registered : 2008-05-09


PostSubject: Re: Faolan   December 7th 2012, 11:10 am

Faolan1, your character needs to have both strengths and weaknesses. E.g., she is a good swimmer but cannot run very fast. Her personality can't really be just "hunting", either. Is she nice, or mean? Is she adventurous, or timid? Just think on that.

And please remember that you shouldn't use first-person role playing (Using words such as I, my, me, we, us... etc. unless the character is speaking). It gets confusing as to what character you are playing if you have more than one (so, instead, use she, her, they, them... etc.).
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PostSubject: Re: Faolan   December 18th 2012, 9:03 pm

i fixed it


A WOLFS PRARE

WHEN IT IS DARK
WE WILL RAISE
NOW IT IS TIME
FOR YOU TO RAISE
THIS IS OUR PRARE
SAY IT RIGHT
THEN YOU ARE...


ONE OF US
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PostSubject: Re: Faolan   December 19th 2012, 2:27 pm

Accepted.
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